One Impulsive death, one unfamiliar man. Around 9 A.M. yesterday morning, Nina Cortez, former bookkeeper of North Point Inn, found Kevin Blohm lying on the floor, dead. What started off an average day of opening up the restaurant, which Cortez had been doing for seven years, along with the cook, Kevin Blohm, we’re the only two in the restaurant at the time. Nina Cortez had just begun counting the revenue of the previous day, when within moments an unfamiliar man turned around the corner carrying a knife. “I started screaming and kicking.” “He reached across my desk and grabbed $130 in $5 bills.”
“I saw a car in the parking lot when I came in, one I did not recognize.” The robber was described as a man in his early 20’s and around 5 feet 11 inches. Cortez assured he was not the only one involved in the robbery, “I heard someone-a man-say, “Get the money out of there,” then someone tried to open the door to my office, but I’d locked it.” He was last seen wearing a scarf covering his lower face with a plaid button up and blue jeans. With no clear reasoning and no further information to be reported, the murder of Kevin Blohm remains a mysterious, for now.
I think your quotes need tell us who is saying them. I know we all can assume the Nina is, but having them hanging there without attribution seems a little strange to me.
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